Read my Lab Report?

I'm not going to post it here, but if anyone would be willing to read a laboratory report I've written and tell me how it could be improved. I never seem to quite understand where I lose marks so I'm hoping someone else could read through it and tell me what sucks about it.

This is for 1st year university, but I'm sure even A-level students could probably give me some kind of constructive criticism. If you reply here I'll email it to you since it contains graphs and tables which I can't paste into TSR.

Thank you all!

Reply 1

C00kies

Woo I will!

Reply 2

Iscariot

Woo YES! Thank you.

I'll PM you.

Reply 3

username68316

I'd be happy to have a look at it. I got my biology coursework mark back today, and it was 1 mark from full marks! (that will probably equate to about 10 ums lol) I was glad to see where I went wrong the first time I did it, so maybe i could help you. Btw, do you have any marking criteria or something to go against? Or any lecturer feedback to have a look at? That would help. As it is i'd measure it against all the little hoop jumping things from A Level coursework =)