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Priestly portrays Mr Birling as an arrogant, vain and selfish business man "talking as hard-headed, practical man of business". this suggest although Mr BIRLING is referee to one of the 7 deadly sins (which is greed he still cares about the family), however this also shows a sign of capitalism priestly wishes to show how shallow money-grubbing can be. Being a capitalist is an advantage to hold power and dominance over their social inferior like Eva smith," hard-headed" illustrate to the audience that priestly deliberately conveys Mr Birling to appear a knowledgeable man.