Hey, I'm applying for Computer Science at some universities this year, and I'm stuck when writing a personal statement, all the videos Ive watched say to have an opening first line due to fact that you want to catch the admissions tutor's attention. We've all heard the same stuff "They read statements for hours on end, you need to make yours sound unique" etc. But I have no idea how to stand out, so I was wondering if someone could read my opening line, and give feedback?
Opening line:
Pulling phones and computers apart hasn't even come close to fulfilling my craving for knowledge with regards to Computer Science.