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    Hey everyone, I'm currently in year 11 and I'm doing my French CW and I was wondering if anyone who knows French can read this and help me make improvements. I'm redoing this because previously I got a C but my teacher thinks I'm capable of getting an A. Please please help! I need to memorise this and make sure it's on point by Tuesday 18/04/16. Thank you very much 😄🌸💜

    Je crois que les weekends sont vraiment importants car on peut se detendre et echapper au stress du college, c’est energisant. A mon avis, les weekends sont bonne pour aller en ville. En particulerement, ce que j’aime est mangeons au restau avec ma famille.

    D’habitude, je passer me weekends avec ma famille, nous faisons du shopping. Cinq fois par semaine, ma soeurs et moi fais des longues promenade au soir car c’est important ca nous aidons a garder la forme. Ma soeur deteste faire de sport, en particulier, du Badminton. Elle toujours dit que “c’est une perte de temps” mais, j’adore la competition et je gagne tout les temps!

    Je m’entends tres bien avec ma famille, en Particulier mon frere car nous sommes similarities et nous faisons le memes sport. Cependant, je prefere passer des temps avec ma meilleur ami car je lui parler de tout, nous aimons allee en ville pour faire du leche vitrine! De plus, nous faisons la sain cuisine car nous sommes membres de gym. Je n’aime pas trop les sports comme; le cricket et le golf car ca ne me stimule pas!

    Le weekend dernier, c'etait ma anniversaire et mes soeurs et ma meilleur ami organizer une surprise pour moi. Nous sommes allee a spa. C’etait bien a l’espoir et apaisant. Apres ce, etait une horreur! Nous avon joue le bowling, je pense que le bowling est un jeu de gamin. Le pire c’est de on nous a vole, quelle surprise!

    Ma weekend de reves irai en Italie avec mon frere at mangerai des nourriture traditionnelle. Nous serions jouerait au foot bien que du Tennis est plus classe! En suite, avec optimisme, nous devrions faire du velo dans la foret pour plein air at pour rester en forme. Mon frere est drole et bizzare et il sera mettre de bon humeur. Ca sera un weekend formidable!
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