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    How's it going I'm a y10 student and in 2 weeks I have my speaking assessment. I need to write a presentation for it. Could you please read it. I'd appreciate it if you leave feedback correct any mistakes I might have and perhaps tell me something I could add thanks. Here it is:

    Generalmente mi dieta es mediocre, dejame explicar. Primers hay bebida energéticas son muy delicios y ayudan con deportes, por no mencionar el hecho de que tengo up partido de baloncesto el próximi vez, desgraciadamente contienen demasiado azucar que causan diabetes ¡Que horror! Y no termina allí, puede ser destructivo para tu corazón y she hacen aquieros en los dientes. Como una manzana todos los dias, lo que Es saludable porque contienen muchas vitaminas que son imprescindibles para un gran cuerpo. Sin embargo tener una dieta sana es dificíl y soy bastante perezoso. Con el fin de mejorar mi salud en general, voy a intentar más alimentos que son ricos en minerales, tal vez un poco de fruta será suficiente. Personalmente me quedo con una naranja, pero es una lástima que contien ácidos que dañan los dientes. Sé esto porque mi dentista me dijo la última vez que lo visité, tiene mucha experienca y confe en él
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