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Why bother with a post grad? Are they even worth it? Have your say! 26-10-2016
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    Hi, I'm experimenting with creative writing - please let me know your thoughts :-)

    She gazed down at her hands. Bright pink polish on thin wiry fingers. How was she here? Progress she had been promised. How fake it all was. She saw it now. The only difference was that this time she couldn't escape.
    She had to sit with it: This world. The lies. The selfishness.
    How she was not built for it.
    But in a strange way she missed it. Listening earnestly. Smiling emptily. Everything that was asked of her. Nothing more nothing less.
    She didn't know them and they certainly didn't know her. But in their glass business rooms, their packed bars, she had played their roles in short skirts, high heels, soft lipstick.
    What had it given it her? Nothing. But that was the point. All the women would be pushed one day or another. What could they be used for?

    Very interesting. It sure does have an interesting set up. I am not the biggest expert but for sure the paragraph was interesting to read. Nice work!
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