Ps

we've been told to structure our PS as
-interest in subject, wider reading, fascinations etc.
-current subjects & how they link to chosen course
-extra-curriculars

i've now completed my PS, thank God!! however, i just feel that it doesnt flow very well between the 3 sections outlined above. does anyone know how to link these sections?! many thanks. x

Reply 1

idrinkpepsi

It sounds like you've already tied your sections in well by linking your current curriculars to your chosen course, so in terms of doing the same with your extra-curriculars, it depends if/how they link to the course.

Obviously it's really good if they are directly relevant (plus any work-experience that relates to your subject area would help), but if they don't totally relate to your course, then that's ok - it can just be a separate section to show how you're a well-rounded person. Just try and display how they've taught you particular skills which will help in your degree.

If you're still worried about how it flows, you can post it in the private PS Helper subforum, where PS helpers will suggest ways to improve it.

Good Luck!
Oh, and what course are you applying for?

Reply 2

Ethereal

tipp-ex; post it in the Ask a PS helper section and someone will review it for you

Reply 3

tipp-ex

Who reads the PS in the private forum?!

Reply 4

Ethereal

You and the helpers. No one else. Read the FAQ for details

Reply 5

kellywood_5

You could include a 'linking sentence' at the end of the first two sections to tie it all together. For example, at the end of the first section, 'my current subjects have confirmed my interest in this course', and at the end of the second section, 'I have combined my studies with extra-curricular activities to broaden my horizons.' Those are pretty rubbish examples, but hopefully you get the idea.