It's almost perfect, just ensure you have commas where needed or else the sentence doesn't make as much sense and is hard to understand.
Posted from TSR Mobile
Posted from TSR Mobile
Quick Reply
Related discussions
- Looking for the impossible
- The International Student Nightmare
- CORE IB stationery :)
- Modern languages at A-Level / uni
- options
- New member?
- Examen capacitate clasa a 8-a și GCSE
- IB language change
- CAS Letter @ DE MONTFORT UNI?
- modern languages personal statement help
- Distance learning - asked to send evidence when reapplying
- The Easiest GCSE
- Complicated Situation - What should I do? SSRI issue.
- Starting year 9.
- What gcse options should I pick if wanna be a future pharmacist???
- GCSE Exam Discussions 2024
- Plano primary care
- A-level French Study Group 2022
- I had weak gcses but strong a levels
- Is health and social care a good gcse?
Latest
Last reply 3 minutes ago
Official Cambridge Postgraduate Applicants 2024 ThreadLast reply 4 minutes ago
lloyds bank 2024 apprenticeshipLast reply 8 minutes ago
Official University College London Applicant Thread for 2024Last reply 10 minutes ago
Is it really such a bad thing to have an undefined relationshipLast reply 10 minutes ago
Official University of Bath Offer Holders Thread for 2024 entryLast reply 11 minutes ago
Official University of Edinburgh Applicant Thread for 2024Posted 12 minutes ago
London student accomodation - Studio available over the summerLast reply 13 minutes ago
National Probation ServiceLast reply 14 minutes ago
Anyone else get an offer for a Rolls Royce degree apprenticeship in Derby (2024)?Last reply 14 minutes ago
Official London School of Economics and Political Science 2024 Applicant ThreadPosted 17 minutes ago
Lloyds of London Work Experience Year 12 2024Last reply 19 minutes ago
Best university to study Film studies/production?Trending
Last reply 13 hours ago
Based on 2023 GCSEs, will grade boundaries be higher or lower in 2024?GCSEs
12
Last reply 16 hours ago
went from 3s to 9s with (literally) night before revision - ask me anythingGCSEs
56
Trending
Last reply 13 hours ago
Based on 2023 GCSEs, will grade boundaries be higher or lower in 2024?GCSEs
12
Last reply 16 hours ago
went from 3s to 9s with (literally) night before revision - ask me anythingGCSEs
56
