Hello guys, i'd just like some feedback on my very first cover letter, written for a marketing assistant position at a firm calle MB Advertising.
My cv is okay...but seeing as this is my first cover letter ever, i just want people to give feedback.
*****Dear Sir/Madam,
It is with great enthusiasm, that I submit my application for the position of Agency Marketing Assistant, for your firm.
The nature of my Marketing and Advertising Management course has allowed me to apply for this. Seeing as so far the course has involved; a great deal of Business Planning & Market research, requiring initiative, self-motivation,
and a wide variety of other skills. As-well as attending various events, such as the MADE Festival and Make Your Mark which was held at the Sheffield University.
As shown on my CV, I have over 2 years’ worth of experience in the Hospitality industry, and in my current role as a Head Receptionist at COSMO I have been responsible for the entire administration part of the restaurant.
Which mainly includes communicating with customers via both email and over the phone on a daily basis. More-so with face to face, as I was the first person the customers would interact with. As-well as handling bookings, personal data, and special requirements which customers may have, and producing documents for training purposes – all of which were done using the computer.
I am a well organised, hardworking person – who pays great attention to detail. I'm flexible, quick to pick up new skills and eager to learn from others. Boasting with lots of ideas and enthusiasm which I can bring to MB Advertising. Combined with my previous experience and expertise, I believe my contribution will have an immediate impact on the organisation.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to meeting with you to discuss my application further.
Yours Sincerely
*****
The job ad is here
http://www.mbadvertising.co.uk/careers/ So really guys...is my cover letter okay ?