Music GCSE Composition Edexcel

Hey,

Basically, I've had an up and down year with my music GCSE especially with our teachers not being there etcetera. We recently just got a new music teacher and he marked out compositions, I was told it was full marks 30/30 but I think there's still more to do or he is over generous. My old music teacher said it was an A* as well.

Please, could you listen to it and give your honest feedback? with a suggested mark?

My exam board is Edexcel and the mark criteria is here:https://www.tes.com/teaching-resource/edexcel-gcse-music-composition-assessment-criteria-11017164

It's on a PowerPoint as the file is too large to upload by itself.