Is the term "logical-minded" too colloquial for a Resume?

I want to use the term "logical-minded" in my resume because it's just the right number of syllables to get the sentence's rhythm right. See, I can't use "logical" and slip in an extra adjective without it sounding like a list, and I can't just use "logical" by itself without sounding rather curt and abrupt.
But every time I type out "logical-minded", the alarms bells go off in my head screaming it's too colloquial.

... So is it?

Or is my brain just having a melt-down from doing the nth redraft of my %*$! resume? ...

(And does anyone else sweat over absolutely ridiculous stuff like sentence rhythm when writing their resumes, like I do? :frown:

...)

Reply 1

medium_cowboy

Couldn't you use "analytical" (same number of syllables) or "rational"? You're right, logical does sound curt; a bit like you're describing a robot. I don't like the sound of "logical-minded" either but that may be personal taste.