(Original post by sarcastic pratchett fan)
A month or so ago I noticed a huge demand for a beginner's guide to politics. So I decided to write one. I have been very busy over the last month. Unfortunately, I had to neglect TSR. This is a plea for help.
I collected all the necessary body parts and bolted them together. When this mammoth task was finally completed wheeled out the good old lightning rod. Now my creation is lurching down the corridor.
What do I do? Do I decapitate it, put a stake through where the heart should be and burn it (ie, destroy it)? Do I run away as fast as I can (ie, leave it)? Or do I continue to tinker with it in the hope that one day it shall become a fully functioning member of society (ie, continue the project)?
The file is in the attachment.
It was longer than I planned. I really want some feedback. I did not write it in order and I shuffled some sections. I also deleted some bits. It may be a bit disjointed. I might refer to something as above when in this version it is actually below.
Feedback is very welcome.If you spot bias, or soemthing you believe to be bias, please get back to me asap. If you spot grammatical or factual errors, please tell me. If you think something should be reword please tell me. If you see something that can be cut out, definitely tell me. If you want something to be added in, tell me if you must. If you care about rep, I will give it out for constructive feedback. Sadly, I am one of those who cares about rep, so if you are dazzled by my brilliance and astounded by my genius why not?
Seriously, I would really like some help with this as I think it is about as far as I can take it by myself. If it's basic stuff (lie pointing out grammatical errors etc), perhaps you could PM me so we can keep the board free for any debate where people think I have been biased etc. I really need some help with this now, so thanks for any time you can give.
To those who want to help, I am also making a table which outlines every party's position on each issue. I have not put it in as I am still finishing at and am finding it difficult to find some of the fringe parties' stances on issues like GM crops etc.
To any mods: althouh this is not a real political debate, I feel this is the most appropriate topic to put this in, especially as there are so many threads here wanting an intro to politics. If you disagree, can we please discuss this first before moving the thread?
PS: On one of my last projects I actually had a teacher email me to tell me that one of her pupils had plagiarised my project. Please do not plagiarise the attached work. You will be caught. I will find you. There will be red hot pokers