For some reason I just really like the first two. Not my best, but I just like them; I think I like them because they seem to tell a story.
The last one I added because it reminds me of batman for some reason :L
I'm going to be overly critical for a minute, which I generally don't like doing but it's just my opinion on why people might not like the photo. The framing is poor. It looks like it's been heavily cropped it from a bigger photo. The focus actually looks to be on the eye lashes which makes the detail in the eye very soft/out of focus. The reflection from the window blinds is so distracting as it covers about 40% of the iris. Eye photography is very difficult without a macro lens.