Personal Statement:Medicine 22 - The Student Room
The Student Room

Personal Statement:Medicine 22

TSR Wiki > University > Applying to University > Personal Statement Library > Medicine 22


How good is this personal statement?

This statement is rated as RED on the quality scale. What does this mean?

This statement has significant errors in structure and/or content, so should not be used as a template for writing your own.

Medicine Personal Statement

Having thoroughly enjoyed the academic study of biology, chemistry and mathematics, I have chosen a degree course that will enable me to combine scientific innovations with a practical application

I have worked as a secretary in an employment agency, which specialises in recruiting nurses and carers. Here I gained the skill of responsibility and being able to work under pressure.I also gained some communication skills, which I believe will prove useful in my chosen degree.Aiming to expand on my knowledge and to further my understanding of hospital life, I have taken up work experience at a hospital,which by the end of it, I hope to have developed skills valuable and helpful to me for this particular profession

In my time at secondary school, I had the privilege of being elected not only as a class prefect but also a school prefect in my final year

with this opportunity, I gained some leadership skills and the spirit of working as a team with my colleagues and I believe this will help me in my future career as a doctor since team spirit is an essential requirement in medicine

I have endeavoured to learn more about medicine by reading around medical related journals from scientific journals such as biological science review. My other interests outside of school lie in my religious activities pertaining to my faith and in sports. As a Christian, I spend time reading my bible and getting involved in activities that goes on in my church. Being a Christian has made me develop a compassion that I believe will help me appreciate the general holistic view of patient's care, and the satisfaction of accepting medicine as a vocation of care and sacrifice. As medicine is a profession that requires the ability to serve with total dedication, I feel that my faith has enabled me to acquire this skill.Sports has been particularly important to me as it has provided me with the opportunity to work with a diverse range of people, be self-discipline and self- motivated to do better and be better. I enjoy playing football, golf, cricket, tennis and table tennis. While at secondary school, I represented my school in athletics (high jump). I competed against schools from the borough and came 4th. In table tennis, I was among 4 boys picked to represent my school in a tournament, where I reached the quaterfinals. I intend to take full advantage of the university facilities to continue my interests particularly in table tennis and tennis

I have learned to be organised, and to maintain a high standard in whatever I do pertaining to my studies. Therefore, I feel that I am in a position to cope with the demands of medicine and university life and I am looking forward to fulfilling my career aspirations of becoming a doctor.

Comments

General Comments:

Comments on the statement:


Discussions Toggle
The European/World Football Thread II
started by: Mess.
forum: Football
replies: 6125
last post: 5 Minutes Ago
Callifornia: Ban on gay marriage unconstitutional
started by: Rds_
forum: International
replies: 62
last post: 6 Minutes Ago
Forbidden thoughts
started by: Chi019
forum: Society
replies: 13
last post: 7 Minutes Ago
TSR Motorbike Society- take 3!
started by: Bathwiggle
forum: Motoring
replies: 4447
last post: 7 Minutes Ago
Am I Over Reacting or am i right to be Pee'd off
started by: Anonymous
forum: Friends, Family and Work
replies: 5
last post: 8 Minutes Ago
The Rugby Union Society
started by: Ethereal
forum: Sport
replies: 5062
last post: 8 Minutes Ago
What was the last film you watched Mk. II
started by: S-man10
forum: Film
replies: 2029
last post: 12 Minutes Ago
University of Aberdeen 2012
started by: ashwin_547
forum: Aberdeen Unis
replies: 4
last post: 14 Minutes Ago
Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim Society
started by: Ape Gone Insane
forum: Gaming
replies: 5556
last post: 14 Minutes Ago
About Anne Hathaway's wedding
started by: greenday2031
forum: Fashion and Beauty
replies: 0
last post: 23 Minutes Ago
Feel so lonely and depressed at university :(
started by: SingMeALullaby
forum: Mental Health
replies: 23
last post: 26 Minutes Ago
The African Society Part VII
started by: The Cornerstone
forum: International Lounge
replies: 7015
last post: 32 Minutes Ago
Girls: This one is for you.
started by: mikestraws
forum: Fitness
replies: 89
last post: 34 Minutes Ago
Does anyone have AQA as English Language spec A - June 2011 paper and mark-scheme?
started by: lucybrown92
forum: English Exams
replies: 1
last post: 34 Minutes Ago
Leeds Medical School Applicants 2012
started by: joemullally
forum: Medical Schools
replies: 1128
last post: 37 Minutes Ago
King's College London Medicine Applicants 2012
started by: kingcoltzan
forum: Medical Schools
replies: 2597
last post: 37 Minutes Ago
Italy?
started by: sylvie92
forum: International Lounge
replies: 568
last post: 37 Minutes Ago
Imperial College Medicine Applicants 2012
started by: oHellno
forum: Medical Schools
replies: 2034
last post: 43 Minutes Ago
Oct/Nov iGCSE exams ?
started by: waquikhan
forum: GCSEs
replies: 54
last post: 43 Minutes Ago
Access course to study medicine?
started by: razda
forum: General University Discussion
replies: 5
last post: 44 Minutes Ago
Article Updates Toggle
Contact Us | Site Rules | Staying Safe on TSR | Advertising | Staff Blog | Essays & Coursework | Terms & Conditions | Top
Customise your TSR | Life Advice | Hobbies and Interests | Debate and Current Affairs | Study Help | University and University courses
Universities and HE Colleges | Careers, Employment and Gap Years | General Discussion

Customise your TSR