Personal Statement:Medicine 25 - The Student Room
The Student Room

Personal Statement:Medicine 25

TSR Wiki > University > Applying to University > Personal Statement Library > Medicine 25


How good is this personal statement?

This statement is rated as RED on the quality scale. What does this mean?

This statement has significant errors in structure and/or content, so should not be used as a template for writing your own.

Medicine Personal Statement

I have been interested in medicine since childhood. This curiosity began, when at the age of five I saw a video of child birth. I was mesmerized by this miracle of life and by the thought of being involved in something as wonderful throughout my life. My decision to study medicine has been strengthened by my enjoyment and success in both my MYP and IB biology and chemistry courses. I am fascinated by the complexity of the human body and the functions it carries out. The aspects which fascinate me most about medicine are being able to help and care for people whilst understanding the sophisticated processes which happen within the human body. Furthermore medicine would suit me as a person because of the ever developing new scientific discoveries, medicine has reached an endless scope with unlimited possibilities which would fulfil my prospects in life

My involvement in a voluntary programme this summer has reinforced my decision to study a degree in medicine. I visited Poland with a group of students to help in a local hospital. My group was assigned to the neurology floor where we cleaned the patients, made their bed and kept them. Although we didn't do anything particularly medical, I was able to experience a hospital and learn about caring and responsibility

This experience was extremely rewarding for me as it made me grow not only as a person but as a prospective medical student. I also attended a first aid class where I learned the procedures that should be carried out in an emergency

Besides my interest in medicine, I have strong interests for music and languages. I have been playing the flute for almost 4 years and I have constantly improved through practice, my progress is obvious in the various concerts I play at throughout the year. I also enjoy learning languages. Spending a year in Germany, in a boarding school when I was 12 years old helped me to learn German from scratch and made me a more independent and outgoing person. I still go to classes to improve my German and prepare myself for various official German exams. Being almost trilingual has also helped me with another hobby, travelling, I love to see different countries throughout the world, and most importantly in order to learn more about different cultures and to meet different people

Having participated for three years in Model United Nations has helped me to significantly develop some important skills particularly useful within the medical profession such as speech writing, communicating and team work. In these conferences I have represented countries as varied as Tanzania and the United Arab Emirates. I was an ambassador in one of the conferences which consequently increased my leadership skills. I consider these some my most important qualities, which would be invaluable to any profession particularly medicine, therefore I continue to develop these skills even further whenever possible, for example after being elected to become a member of the National Honour Society for which membership is voted by the teachers of my school

In order to be a successful doctor, one must be caring, dedicated and inquisitive in this field as well as a whole rounded person. I believe these are some of the qualities I possess and I am certain that by studying medicine I can accomplish my dreams and make a contribution to the society I live in.

Comments

General Comments:

Comments on the statement:


Discussions Toggle
Physiotherapy: 2012 entry
started by: MissLightyear
forum: Healthcare and Nursing
replies: 1134
last post: 2 Minutes Ago
Depression Society MKVI
started by: Idle
forum: Mental Health
replies: 1756
last post: 3 Minutes Ago
Age for starting a PhD?
started by: apadenz
forum: Postgraduate
replies: 7
last post: 5 Minutes Ago
Human race split.
started by: PendulumBoB
forum: Society
replies: 7
last post: 8 Minutes Ago
The European/World Football Thread II
started by: Mess.
forum: Football
replies: 6125
last post: 15 Minutes Ago
Callifornia: Ban on gay marriage unconstitutional
started by: Rds_
forum: International
replies: 62
last post: 16 Minutes Ago
Forbidden thoughts
started by: Chi019
forum: Society
replies: 13
last post: 17 Minutes Ago
TSR Motorbike Society- take 3!
started by: Bathwiggle
forum: Motoring
replies: 4447
last post: 17 Minutes Ago
Am I Over Reacting or am i right to be Pee'd off
started by: Anonymous
forum: Friends, Family and Work
replies: 5
last post: 17 Minutes Ago
The Rugby Union Society
started by: Ethereal
forum: Sport
replies: 5062
last post: 18 Minutes Ago
What was the last film you watched Mk. II
started by: S-man10
forum: Film
replies: 2029
last post: 22 Minutes Ago
University of Aberdeen 2012
started by: ashwin_547
forum: Aberdeen Unis
replies: 4
last post: 24 Minutes Ago
Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim Society
started by: Ape Gone Insane
forum: Gaming
replies: 5556
last post: 24 Minutes Ago
About Anne Hathaway's wedding
started by: greenday2031
forum: Fashion and Beauty
replies: 0
last post: 33 Minutes Ago
Feel so lonely and depressed at university :(
started by: SingMeALullaby
forum: Mental Health
replies: 23
last post: 35 Minutes Ago
The African Society Part VII
started by: The Cornerstone
forum: International Lounge
replies: 7015
last post: 42 Minutes Ago
Girls: This one is for you.
started by: mikestraws
forum: Fitness
replies: 89
last post: 43 Minutes Ago
Does anyone have AQA as English Language spec A - June 2011 paper and mark-scheme?
started by: lucybrown92
forum: English Exams
replies: 1
last post: 44 Minutes Ago
Leeds Medical School Applicants 2012
started by: joemullally
forum: Medical Schools
replies: 1128
last post: 47 Minutes Ago
Italy?
started by: sylvie92
forum: International Lounge
replies: 568
last post: 47 Minutes Ago
Article Updates Toggle
Contact Us | Site Rules | Staying Safe on TSR | Advertising | Staff Blog | Essays & Coursework | Terms & Conditions | Top
Customise your TSR | Life Advice | Hobbies and Interests | Debate and Current Affairs | Study Help | University and University courses
Universities and HE Colleges | Careers, Employment and Gap Years | General Discussion

Customise your TSR