Any A* phrases I could add to my piece of work?

i don't know exactly how to say this in french, but it should be easy to figure out how, my teacher told us to try and include three tenses in our orals, so i used:
'next year, i'd like to go to __________ because of the ___________ but my mum doesn't like the __________'

"l’année prochaine, je voudrais aller _______ parce que/car ____________ mais, malheureusement (unfortunately) ma mère n'aime pas __________."

"Je ne pense pas qu'il soit nécessaire d'avoir les vacances a l’étranger chaque année."
I don't think that it's necessary to have holidays abroad every year.
It's subjunctive, so that's like A at AS level.

Would you mind taking a look at piece of work by any chance?

thanks i kinda knew the beginning, but couldn't really remember the rest!

Je ne pense pas qu'il soit nécessaire d'avoir les des vacances a l’étranger chaque année."
I don't think that it's necessary to have holidays abroad every year.
It's subjunctive, so that's like A at AS level.

Yeah I can, PM me it.

"Je ne pense pas qu'il soit nécessaire d'avoir les vacances a l’étranger chaque année."
I don't think that it's necessary to have holidays abroad every year.
It's subjunctive, so that's like A at AS level.

C'était une expérience que je n'oublierais jamais - It was an experience that I shall never forget

Et après avoir fait cela - and after having done that

Après être arrivé(e)/en arrivant - after having arrived/on arrival

On est tombés en panne - we broke down

Il y avait trop de monde - it was too crowded/ there were too many people

On s'est bien amusés - we had a good time

Si j'avais le temps, j'irais à la plage - if I had time, I would go to the beach

Some A* Connectives

Sauf - except
Donc - therefore/so
Ni...Ni... - neither...nor...
Ensuite - next
Enfin - finally
D'habitude - normally
Alors - so
Néanmoins/cependant/pourtant - however
En fait - in fact
Sinon - otherwise
Même si - even if
Malgré - despite
De même - similarly

I'm happy to check your work through for you when you're done.