a) no it isn't! I loved it, great set-up - and I'm someone who normally doesn't even like the idea of later in life fics!
b) I didn't spot a single one. I only had two hours of English class a week while at school so I know I'm not the best judge, but I honestly didn't notice a single mistake. I was reading way too fast to notice anything apart from the story!
c) didn't notice it - it wasn't cheesy at all. It felt real.
d) it doesn't, not at all.
e) I don't even know what a tense is so...
f) I like that, and I also like how they're both two different people. And Blaine is actually Blaine, not Darren, like so many people seem to do. I love your Kurt too.
g) only you could have written that because it's a w e s o m e.
h) of course not! Damn it woman, if I could write like that I would be posting it all over the world just to show off!
And now I'll add
i) when is the next chapter?
j) poor poor Blaine! I HATE it when people do that 'you're so young you're supposed to have fun now' thing, and it really does happen and I could totally picture it happening to them!
k) your Kurt is so REAL! As is his job and location.
l) apart from all the individual criticism, can I just say that this is the best fic I ever read thus far? And I'm not even being nice, it honestly is. It's your writing style; you can just tell that you are way more intelligent and have read a lot more than your average fangirl.
m) marry me and write pretty stories like this one all the time?