Hey!
I did the same paper yesterday. Hm, you might lose one or two marks but no more. I would say, in terms of reading marks, it is 5 per bullet point adding up to 15. Normally you wouldn't lose more than a mark but as the event is quite substantial you might lose two marks. Did you not mention it later in your talk? How did you generally find it?
I definitely wrote too much for the second bullet point and a lot less for the first and third bullet point. Generally my answer does not sound and read like a talk too, I am hoping to get around 15/20!
How did you find the other questions? I thought the writer's effects question was pretty good, I wrote that the frost was compared to a predatory animal and I wrote that the fire was compared to a young bird, to which Tom Vincent was a paternal figure.
The summary was easy too, loads to talk about in passage B and a bit less to mention from passage A. Do you think I will lose marks for not writing my summaries in the present tense?