descriptive writing help please

hi well my question for my ca is describe the scene in a local park and my description is quiet dark at the park there is one drunken guy on his own please can you give me any help/advice thank you in advance

Be original. Don't use cliches. Remember the figurative techniques available to you (similes, metaphors, personification...), but don't overuse these. Try to use interesting verbs rather than piling up the adjectives. Focus on small, unexpected things rather than the scene as a big picture - it's much more interesting.