Oh, thank god, I haven't ****ed up as bad as I thought I had then. I got home and searched the definition of equality of outcome and it was mainly to do with the economy and I thought NOOOOOO. Anyways, the patriarchy question was easy. I was shocked too by the essay question. I wrote about how despite women gaining equality in the legal sphere it has failed to translate into the public and private reality. Talked about the pay gap, representation despite the use of quotas/shortlists, some other public sphere crap. Then I spoke about the private sphere. How despite legislation protecting women against domestic violence, rape and abuse, it has reached epidemic levels. Moreover, the justice system is failing them - obviously here I was going off track! Haha, then I spoke about ethnicity, which, despite leg, has failed to create a equality of outcome, or little equality regardless, I spoke about institutional racism, representation, pay gaps, and the rights of immigrants and asylum seekers as means of reinforcing the lack of support and equality within the UK. HOWEVER, I idiotically wrote about how the rising racial rhetoric and anti-multiculturalism attitudes are curbing liberties and rights of minorities, whilst also creating a hostile environment that only proves to create more racial tensions, more stigmas and reinforcing racial attitudes and inequalities, therefore failing to provide equality of outcome.
As you can see I ranted, and my essay wasn't focused enough - not much else I can do now. Just happy it's all over with. Good luck with results!