Si j'avais le choix, J'y visiterais chaque année! - If I had the choice, I would visit there every year C'est une destination qui plaît à tout le monde- It's a place which appeals to everybody C'était une experience formidable comme dans un conte de fées - it was a wonderful experience like in a fairytale Pendant nos vacances, nous avons eu seulement un jour de pluie et sinon, il a fait beau tout le temps. During our holiday we only had one day of rain, otherwise it was sunny all the time Quand je serais plus âgé(e), je voudrais aller en vacances avec mes amis au lieu de mes parents pour que je puisse avoir plus de liberté! When I'm older I'd like to go on holiday with my friends instead of my parents so that I can have more freedom
Some nice phrases - for you CA try and talk about the past, where you went when you were younger, more recently - je viens d'aller en vacances avec.. nice phrase meaning I've just been on holiday with... then mention future plans - what you do on the holiday, good and bad points, personal opinions - that will get you the highest mark If you want to write something up, mail me and I'll check it for you