Oh I did the treatment of women as well, and I think I did Sonnet 130
I was speaking to someone else about it , don't know if you saw it but this is the best advice I have really, what I said to them was: For me it really helped me to do comparative paragraphs instead of a section analysing the Shakespeare and poetry separately; this makes it flow better and you can work from the points you've used about Shakespeare.
Mine was on the treatment of women and my Shakespeare text was Romeo and Juliet. For example I started off looking at Romeo's idolisation of women and linked it with The Sun Rising - both use natural imagery, they both elevate the woman's position to that of a goddess etc. Comparison is worth like 50% of your mark- try to find both subtle and obvious links and always remember to write about the similarities and differences in the writer's purpose, the effect on the reader, and social and historical context between the Shakespeare and whichever poem you're writing about.
When analysing the poems talk about the poem as a whole but also compare a certain line to one from the play. Here you can look at a certain word and talk about why it's important and why the writer may have chosen it specifically. Eg. Romeo says 'Juliet is the sun' using this metaphor to convey her radiant beauty, whereas Donne addresses the Sun directly saying 'if her eyes had not blinded thine' (well he says something like that ok it was a long time ago) implying that his lover's beauty transcends that of the sun and nature, elevating her to a position of idolatry.
Also, I planned mine completely at home and drafted it which helped loads as you can barely take in any notes. This way I knew exactly what I wanted to write when we were in controlled conditions and I didn't need to sit there for ages wondering what to write next.
Good luck! I hope you do really well
The WJEC revision guide also includes some useful tips which I'll include here.
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