Can someone please read my Law Personal statement for me?

I'm an international student so I'm applying through a guidance counsellor who's going to tell me my university options as soon as he's got all my relevant documents.



I actually want a career in politics but want to do a geberal LLB degree.

I've mentioned I want to get into politics and why getting a law degree would benefit me, but idk if that's going to offend them or something because they'd be like why don't you just study politics.

No you should be honest lots of politicians do Law degrees.

Hmmmm. I don't understand what you are getting at. The names kind of give it away. Cambridge is in Cambridge, and London MET is in London?

I'll happily read it and edit it for you. As @goodbloke has said (incidentally, I'm sure they read my PS about 6/7 years ago?), it's generally a pretty bad idea to send your PS to strangers but I'm a graduate and have applied to university 3 times successfully (4 if you count my LLB application which I received offers for but declined to take a gap year and apply for Philosophy). I'm starting my 2nd degree and 3rd university course this Sept so I have no reason to do anything improper with or to your PS and it wouldn't benefit me in anyway from seeing your Law statement since I'm a science student and Philosophy grad.

I've also got about 7-8 years worth of post history on TSR to prove I've already been to university and I don't need a Law statement for myself. Anyhow, if you decide to send it to a stranger, I'm one of the most trustworthy you'll find and as I've said, I've got experience of the PS and UCAS application in general.

Feel like I'm pitching on Dragon's Den here. Just don't send it to a new member with a low post count who you know absolutely nothing about. I've sent my CV and uni applications to people over TSR in the past - I just picked very carefully and it was fine.

I'm an international student so I'm applying through a guidance counsellor who's going to tell me my university options as soon as he's got all my relevant documents.



I actually want a career in politics but want to do a geberal LLB degree.

I've mentioned I want to get into politics and why getting a law degree would benefit me, but idk if that's going to offend them or something because they'd be like why don't you just study politics.

I'll happily read it and edit it for you. As @goodbloke has said (incidentally, I'm sure they read my PS about 6/7 years ago?), it's generally a pretty bad idea to send your PS to strangers but I'm a graduate and have applied to university 3 times successfully (4 if you count my LLB application which I received offers for but declined to take a gap year and apply for Philosophy). I'm starting my 2nd degree and 3rd university course this Sept so I have no reason to do anything improper with or to your PS and it wouldn't benefit me in anyway from seeing your Law statement since I'm a science student and Philosophy grad.

I've also got about 7-8 years worth of post history on TSR to prove I've already been to university and I don't need a Law statement for myself. Anyhow, if you decide to send it to a stranger, I'm one of the most trustworthy you'll find and as I've said, I've got experience of the PS and UCAS application in general.

Feel like I'm pitching on Dragon's Den here. Just don't send it to a new member with a low post count who you know absolutely nothing about. I've sent my CV and uni applications to people over TSR in the past - I just picked very carefully and it was fine.

Don't send you PS to anyone over the internet - there is no guarantee that it won't be plagiarised, and plagiarism is very real. Once you've sent it to someone, you have no control over it

I never knew you applied for law. Where were your offers from?

Send it to something beautiful id take the chance.

I'd say send it to me.

I need to give it in at 9, I didn't think anyone would create a personal statement from mine in 2 hours.

And even if they do submit in the near future, it's theirs that would be classified as the plagiarised one, not mine.

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I'd say send it to me.

Yeah. Why not? I am a top 10 uni doing law. I would say I am suitably qualified.

Somehow I don't think you are a university don't you think?

It and I are one. We're symbiotic.

Yeah well now apparently someone can steal it. It sucks though so it's very unlikely.

Yes, it was my first uni application when I was 17 and doing my A-Levels - long before I fully understood the competitive nature of Law and the importance of uni rank for that particular subject.

I ultimately decided against it because I wasn't on track for AAA at A-level and for Law that limits your uni applications which ultimately limits your career since uni prestige/rank is a big factor in securing training contracts, as I'm sure you'll know.

So I took a year out and did another college course, looking to do medicine as I wanted to care for people - decided that wasn't for me either (despised Physics and Chem) and having no science A-levels for a healthcare degree but wanting to go to university I reapplied through UCAS for BA Philosophy since I'd done elements of Philosophy in my RS A-level and loved it. Graduated, worked for 4 years and applied to the OU for Biology (my current studies), worked (still working!) full time alongside my course. Last year I applied for Physio BSc which I'm starting this year.

My offers for Law were:
Liverpool (firm)
Oxford Brookes (insurance)
Sheffield Hallam (offer)
LJMU (offer)
Derby (offer)

As I say, I declined them all and studied Philosophy at Liverpool. Graduated with a 2.1 with honors. Funny how life turns out - I'm finally getting to train in a caring profession 8 years on (without the horrid phys/chem) and with a degree under my belt. Strange how I can look back at my post history as a 17/18 year old applying to uni for the first time. My TSR is like a time capsule.

It and I are one. We're symbiotic.