How Do I Talk About My Hospital Work Experience in My Personal Statement?

I started by writing down everything I saw, no matter how small. Then for each thing I tried to find something that I learnt/ could take away. Finally link that back to medicine/ role of a doctor ect

No point in repeating yourself with what you've learned - quality over quantity (this is assuming you are applying for medicine!)

Yes, I'm applying to medicine.

Since I've done a week in GP surgery at the start of the year, I've written everything I could relate to the characteristics of a doctor from there and so now I can't think of anything else. So, as you said there is no point in repeating myself.

I might talk about the differences in the two environments, that's all I can think of for now.

You're unlikely to have space to compare them, with everything else you need to write. You could always say something like 'From my work experience at X and Y...'

Hi

I have Recently done a week of work experience in the Cardiology department in a local hospital where I observed the doctors and nurses and how they interact with the patients.

My problem is that I have seen so many things but I don't know how to make it sound interesting when I talk about it in my personal statement; everything I write just sounds so cliche. Any advice will be very helpful.