I think the main problem is keywords. You need to be more specific and detailed if you want to get those extra marks. Cuz it seems like you know the content, its just writing it in the way the mark scheme wants you to write it in, so the best way is just to do papers, mark them, and read the markers had to say about the paper. There are some things that you just have to learn, like definitions, word for word. Good luck in your GCSE's!!