Anyone done A-Level English Lit?

Can you read my essay and roughly tell me what I should do to improve my grade. My grade for this topic has been a D/C. If you want to read the essay PM me, it is a practise essay, not to be submitted.

Hi there,
I'm currently doing A level English Lit Edexcel
studying Frankenstein/Handmaids Tale
Hamlet/ a streetcar named desire

I’m the same, but tame of the shrewd and Dr.Faustus AS.

ahh right okayy
What is your essay on?

Dr. Faustus. I have been using York notes to improve my essay, so I just wanted someone to read it and put a grade on it.

Ahh right, I get you, I don't study that text so I'm not quite sure
However I do study Handmaid's Tale and Frankenstein for the Prose examination, feel free to PM me your essays on that if you need help or marking.
Sorry couldn't help much.

Okay, thank you. Is it similar to just be given a question and prove your argument?

What aspect of english literature are you talking about?

Handmaids and Frankenstein, are you just given a question. Then you answer it.

Handmaids and Frankenstein, are you just given a question. Then you answer it.

Correct. We are given one question and that we have to compare both texts, making links throughout. We don't get a choice between two questions.

So for handmaids and Frankenstein.

Yes for Frankenstein and Handmaids

Okay, thanks and are you doing coursework? How is that?

We haven't started coursework yet but we will do in some time.

It will probably be the death of me.

Naa, I'm sure you'll be fine
Just follow the instructions given by the exam board and think it through with creativeness and that'w what'll get you the marks

I don’t know. My other teacher is great, but she favourites the A star students and it pretty much sucks for me. Because its like she cares about them a bit more than the rest. And it’s sad for me, because I get favourited in my other subject but I don’t care, if my teachers favourite me. But with English it’s a subject I struggle with. Not the other subject the teachers favourite me in.