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does anyone know how to conclude a 20 marker sociology essay?
Yes. What essay is it?
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does anyone know how to conclude a 20 marker sociology essay?

it's an education essay about how external factors might lead to pupils underachievement.
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it's an education essay about how external factors might lead to pupils underachievement.

Intro - explain what external factors is and link to underachievement, USE A STATISTIC (makes it seem like you know a lot!)
PARA 1 - External
PARA 2 - Internal
PARA 3 - External
PARA 4 - Internal
Conclusion
Use the PERC structure (point, evidence, reference, criticism)
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thank you
Off the top of my head this is a non exhaustive list

Parental involvement
Culture of parents
Religion to some extent
Money
Lack of resources etc
Priority
Expectations
Difficult decisions

One paragraph for each. Use the recommended technique above to structure your essay.

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