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My teacher always writes "therfore" at the end of my paragraphs to say that i should elaborate on my points.
However, i don't understand how much more extra information i need to know as the textbook doesn't provide that much detail.
However, i don't understand how much more extra information i need to know as the textbook doesn't provide that much detail.
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(Original post by Noodlzzz)
If you want to post an example paragraph I will look over it for you
If you want to post an example paragraph I will look over it for you
That was for 6 marks. but i wrote two paragraphs like that and she gave me 3 marks.
The working memory model identifies that there is more than one type of Short Term memory unlike the multi-store memory model which views memory as a unitary store .
For a 2 mark question she gave me 1 mark
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One strength of the Avatistic form is that it took criminology away from its moral discourse nature into a scientific nature full of variables that can be tested and manipulated giving criminology a greater credibility.
That was for 6 marks. but i wrote two paragraphs like that and she gave me 3 marks.
The working memory model identifies that there is more than one type of Short Term memory unlike the multi-store memory model which views memory as a unitary store .
For a 2 mark question she gave me 1 mark
One strength of the Avatistic form is that it took criminology away from its moral discourse nature into a scientific nature full of variables that can be tested and manipulated giving criminology a greater credibility.
That was for 6 marks. but i wrote two paragraphs like that and she gave me 3 marks.
The working memory model identifies that there is more than one type of Short Term memory unlike the multi-store memory model which views memory as a unitary store .
For a 2 mark question she gave me 1 mark
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