Fleurville // What do you think of my Poem! + BioWatch
Ensued... Was it or was it not winter?
Caressing my unfurling thoughts, her
Love was unending, out of hopefulness,
In the beauty of lilies, was it dew
Or hoarfrost? In the shadow of bluebells,
Time ensnared mired in water, oded shells...
Bowers concealed by dust, I shall find you.
Hi Guys, thanks for all the feedback I've received so far it means a lot. Just to explain, I'm 24 and I live with ADHD and Asperger's Syndrome, I also have other MH Conditions which makes getting a job impossible. I want to be a poet... It's really all I have going for me, but my brother says my poetry is **** and I don't get better and I should just give up It makes me really sad, I hope to start publishing soon, but for now I'm just posting on TSR. Thanks for commenting Guys and Girls! Love you all.