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people have become obsessed with travelling ever further and faster however travel is expensive, dangerous, damaging and a foolish waste of time

write a article for a news website in which you argue your point of view on this statement

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i had this as an exam a couple of weeks ago. i dont have the paper but i got a 9.
i went for the approach of pollution paragraph, use a quote from someone like greta thunberg (just make it up - they dont care), road accidents using statistics of road accidents, including those that are fatal: place emphasis on the fatal crashes, i also did environmentally - infrastructure ruining eco systems and destroying biodiversity, noise pollution also disrupts animals.
i hope this is what you were looking for, if not lemme know and ill do my best to help more x
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(Original post by geebees)
i had this as an exam a couple of weeks ago. i dont have the paper but i got a 9.
i went for the approach of pollution paragraph, use a quote from someone like greta thunberg (just make it up - they dont care), road accidents using statistics of road accidents, including those that are fatal: place emphasis on the fatal crashes, i also did environmentally - infrastructure ruining eco systems and destroying biodiversity, noise pollution also disrupts animals.
i hope this is what you were looking for, if not lemme know and ill do my best to help more x
you don't have to ,of course, but if you could try and remember and post your answer that would be sooo helpful, I've been trying to look for a grade 9 example of this question for so long to get a good idea of how to structure my answer. If you cba then no worries of course.
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(Original post by peza)
you don't have to ,of course, but if you could try and remember and post your answer that would be sooo helpful, I've been trying to look for a grade 9 example of this question for so long to get a good idea of how to structure my answer. If you cba then no worries of course.
i don't have access to it as it's being used as grading evidence and we weren't allowed it back for control purposes i basically just wrote it all in paragraphs with a structured intro and conclusion to emphasise my view. sorry i can't really help much else
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yeh Id go for environmental damage, plane crash fatalities, guidance towers making light pollution, tourism taking away the culture of places/littering on beaches etc but aren't you meant to get a source for the directed writing section in english lang?
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(Original post by geebees)
i had this as an exam a couple of weeks ago. i dont have the paper but i got a 9.
i went for the approach of pollution paragraph, use a quote from someone like greta thunberg (just make it up - they dont care), road accidents using statistics of road accidents, including those that are fatal: place emphasis on the fatal crashes, i also did environmentally - infrastructure ruining eco systems and destroying biodiversity, noise pollution also disrupts animals.
i hope this is what you were looking for, if not lemme know and ill do my best to help more x
thanks this was helpfull
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(Original post by magnetodespacito)
yeh Id go for environmental damage, plane crash fatalities, guidance towers making light pollution, tourism taking away the culture of places/littering on beaches etc but aren't you meant to get a source for the directed writing section in english lang?
i didnt have a source as my school gave us 50 minute exams so we just had this question for the writing as high control evidence, but we did the other questions with a source but low control at home/in lesson.
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