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What Do You Think of My Poem?

Not unlike a young girl in flower, Oh spoken
Of bosom bone! Beautiful like
A recitation, I witnessed & I waited.
I am the amour of my friend.

Oh somber winged caveman! Coming to fruition.
Oh yelping of an age-old Indian redskin! To
Stone, a Grim Reaper's sickle, from grandeur coming,
I am the one who scatters stars...

Bestowed upon me, by heaven pierced, anima
Omega; repeopled by her.
Oh playing the drums! Made up out
Of dreams, a boat; an hour magical stroked by it.
(edited 2 years ago)

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What Do You Think of My Poem?

Not unlike a young girl in flower, Oh spoken
Of bosom bone! Beautiful like
A recitation, I witnessed & I waited.
I am the amour of my friend.

Oh somber winged caveman! Coming to fruition.
Oh yelping of an age-old Indian redskin! To
Stone, a Grim Reaper's sickle, from grandeur coming,
I am the one who scatters stars...

Bestowed upon me, by heaven pierced, anima
Omega; repeopled by her.
Oh playing the drums! Made up out
Of dreams, a boat; an hour magical stroked by it.
(edited 2 years ago)
Not unlike a young girl in flower, Oh spoken
Of bosom bone! Beautiful like
A recitation, I witnessed & I waited.
I am the amour of my friend.

Oh somber winged caveman! Coming to fruition.
Oh yelping of an age-old Indian redskin! To
Stone, a Grim Reaper's sickle, from grandeur coming,
I am the one who scatters stars...

Bestowed upon me, by heaven pierced, anima
Omega; repeopled by her.
Oh playing the drums! Made up out
Of dreams, a boat; an hour magical stroked by it.
(edited 2 years ago)
Intriguing
Original post by Dentaldreams
Intriguing

Thank you my friend
Original post by RimbaudBerry
Thank you my friend

What inspired this piece of work?
Original post by Dentaldreams
What inspired this piece of work?

A lot of 19th century French poetry, sorry if it's weird!
Original post by RimbaudBerry
A lot of 19th century French poetry, sorry if it's weird!

Don’t be daft, I love poetry
Original post by Dentaldreams
Don’t be daft, I love poetry

That's cool, who are your favourite poets? Or favourite poet, I really want to know.
Original post by RimbaudBerry
That's cool, who are your favourite poets? Or favourite poet, I really want to know.

I’ve got controversial taste but a few I really like are Wilfred Owen, carol Ann Duffy and Simon Armitage. Who are your favorites?
Original post by Dentaldreams
I’ve got controversial taste but a few I really like are Wilfred Owen, carol Ann Duffy and Simon Armitage. Who are your favorites?

Oh wow, those are really cool choices, I've read poems by all of them, although I don't remember the names. I like Paul Valery!
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Original post by RimbaudBerry
Oh wow, those are really cool choices, I've read poems by all of them, although I don't remember the names. I like Paul Valery!

I’ll name my favorites by each of them just in case you know them, Dulce et Decorum est, Medusa, and Mother any distance.
I like Paul Valery, if I remember correctly he wrote the faux death
Original post by Dentaldreams
I’ll name my favorites by each of them just in case you know them, Dulce et Decorum est, Medusa, and Mother any distance.
I like Paul Valery, if I remember correctly he wrote the faux death

I'm going to read all the poems you named!

And yeah he did, his style's really cerebral and he has great technique. Wilfred Owen's really really talented as well.
Original post by RimbaudBerry
I'm going to read all the poems you named!

And yeah he did, his style's really cerebral and he has great technique. Wilfred Owen's really really talented as well.

You should!

He sounds good, I think I’ll read some more of his work. I find Wilfred Owen astonishing, unfortunate about his untimely death, how much more he could have given!
The porcelain of a dragon, ratherly, the
Tea of a pigcup, on the beach
Of a Cornishman, a single mottled drop of
Sperm, running by its spine a river, was, flotsam
Of an enbeaud nature; of things

To come an enjoiner.
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Don't like it.
Original post by RimbaudBerry
Sperm, running by its spine a river, was, flotsam

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Original post by ForestShadow
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What does the picture mean lol, can you verbalise your thoughts?
Original post by RimbaudBerry
Not unlike a young girl in flower, Oh spoken
Of bosom bone! Beautiful like
A recitation, I witnessed & I waited.
I am the amour of my friend.

Oh somber winged caveman! Coming to fruition.
Oh yelping of an age-old Indian redskin! To
Stone, a Grim Reaper's sickle, from grandeur coming,
I am the one who scatters stars...

Bestowed upon me, by heaven pierced, anima
Omega; repeopled by her.
Oh playing the drums! Made up out
Of dreams, a boat; an hour magical stroked by it.

Hiya,

I've now managed to move all 4 of your threads together and will move this thread into the creative corner forum now. :smile:

Please avoid posting the same thread multiple times on the site as this constitutes spam. :nospam:

Thanks very much,
MR
Original post by RimbaudBerry
What does the picture mean lol, can you verbalise your thoughts?

haha I just didnt expect that wording and topic to be used, I think its just unique

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