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    you guys are being a bit harsh, I'd say a high C maybe a B but, the first sentance has no subject. What is that sizzling ball? (is it "the sizzling ball" or is something "like a sizzling ball" ) also, the sizzling ball quite clearly hasn't done anything. Change that, how does it make you feel etc. (add something refering to what it did at the end of that first sentance, don't forget commas to break it up a little)
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    (Original post by Tobedotty)
    you guys are being a bit harsh, I'd say a high C maybe a B but, the first sentance has no subject. What is that sizzling ball? (is it "the sizzling ball" or is something "like a sizzling ball" ) also, the sizzling ball quite clearly hasn't done anything. Change that, how does it make you feel etc. (add something refering to what it did at the end of that first sentance, don't forget commas to break it up a little)
    :joyman: You spelt sentence wrong. Twice.
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    (Original post by mel0n)
    I really really don't want to be harsh but I'm a bit of a grammar/punctuation-whore (or I try to be), so I'd like to point out that you spelt sentence wrong. Twice.
    Yes, and?
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    Yes, and?
    How can one take your grade-guessing seriously?
 
 
 
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