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    (Original post by Liam_G)
    Thanks .

    You really think it's decent? Maybe I should write in my sleep more often...

    (I am yet to write any poetry whilst intoxicated.... that might reult in something interesting )
    Please post it on here when you do xD
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    "Thing-like thing."
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    very tim burton.
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    The creepy poem was awesome.
    Future ahead of you for childrens poetry. Its a similar style to that which you write in.
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    I liked it

    scary that you wrote it half asleep though!
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    Aaaah the human psyche.

    Dali used to drift in between conscious and sleep. He was a genius.
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    (Original post by Liam_G)
    Thanks .

    You really think it's decent? Maybe I should write in my sleep more often...

    (I am yet to write any poetry whilst intoxicated.... that might reult in something interesting )
    It's good but it starts off a bit limerick like and then the rhyming scheme changes and it gets very dark and disturbing!
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    I love impromptu poetry!

    I haven't written one in ages.
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    it's creepy...










    ...but i like it
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    (Original post by amiejade-x)
    it's creepy...

    ...but i like it
    Thanks!

    (Original post by Ultimate_Geek)
    I love impromptu poetry!

    I haven't written one in ages.
    I just write poetry when I'm bored (and asleep, apparently)

    (Original post by jimcatinnes)
    It's good but it starts off a bit limerick like and then the rhyming scheme changes and it gets very dark and disturbing!
    I know, It starts off quite nicely (before the dark spiralling creepiness of being dragged around for eternity :erm:)

    (Original post by JK471993)
    Aaaah the human psyche.

    Dali used to drift in between conscious and sleep. He was a genius.
    Yeah, I doubt i'm a genius. My psyche needs fixing by the sounds of things.

    (Original post by lechaton-x)
    I liked it

    scary that you wrote it half asleep though!
    Thanks

    (Original post by Wolvarium)
    The creepy poem was awesome.
    Future ahead of you for childrens poetry. Its a similar style to that which you write in.
    I'm glad you liked it. I don't now if children would like to hear bout creepy thing like this though

    (Original post by CB91)
    "Thing-like thing."
    I think I wrote about thing-like things because I watched the film "the Grinch" earlier that day. It's kinda Dr.Seuss-y.

    (Original post by rufus_da_bear)
    very tim burton.
    I'll take that s a compliment :yep:

    /massive quote-fest
 
 
 
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