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    I just sent it to you with a few marked corrections, just a few things that didn't sound quite right to me with a suggestion on what to change it to. I may not be right, but hopefully it helps along with all the suggestions people have made already
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    Did you PM it to me? This app I'm using is absolute ****, so I'm not sure it's come through, sorry!

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    (Original post by Devify)
    I just sent it to you with a few marked corrections, just a few things that didn't sound quite right to me with a suggestion on what to change it to. I may not be right, but hopefully it helps along with all the suggestions people have made already
    I did it ! Thank you
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    (Original post by Hug_or_Be_Hugged)
    Did you PM it to me? This app I'm using is absolute ****, so I'm not sure it's come through, sorry!

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    No, don't worry. in the end I opted for posting it in the thread,
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    Me no speak no english
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    know it's a little too late but you wrote 'mams' (slang for mums) instead of ma'ams. Even then it's madams.
 
 
 
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