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    bang in the centre
    now make the font look groovy
    and use the palette
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    (Original post by the bear)
    bang in the centre
    now make the font look groovy
    and use the palette
    I'll take your advice
    Just in order to add spice
    But this will not rhyme
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    (Original post by QuantumSnowy)
    I'll take your advice
    Just in order to add spice
    But this will not rhyme
    haiku are not rhymes
    they are separate jewels
    dropped into a pond
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    (Original post by Kallisto)
    Did you really have create a new thread to begin a new haiku? autumn? is there not an autumn thread from the last year? complaints aside, it is haiku time!

    Another season
    in another time this year
    Here comes the autumn!
    we are internet
    our tomorrow is today
    get with the now dude
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    (Original post by the bear)
    haiku are not rhymes
    they are separate jewels
    dropped into a pond
    Could they not get lost?
    In the depth of such ponds
    Gems disappear fast
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    (Original post by the bear)
    we are internet
    our tomorrow is today
    get with the now dude
    Guten Morgen bear
    You would be extremely right there
    I must do my hair
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    (Original post by QuantumSnowy)
    Could they not get lost?
    In the depth of such ponds
    Gems disappear fast
    haiku flicker once
    we glimpse them and let them go
    evanescent gleam

    PS line 2 needs another syllabol
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    (Original post by CheeseIsVeg)
    Guten Morgen bear
    You would be extremely right there
    I must do my hair
    Guten afternabend Gnadiges Fraulein
    That cheese gets everywhere nomsayin'
    This aint no haiku :headfire:
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    (Original post by the bear)
    haiku flicker once
    we glimpse them and let them go
    evanescent gleam

    PS line 2 needs another syllabol
    Sorry about that
    Meant to put a great in there
    Just in front of depth
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    (Original post by QuantumSnowy)
    Sorry about that
    Meant to put a great in there
    Just in front of depth
    dude it's no biggie
    nobody but me saw that
    your haiku rocks now



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    Extremely jetlagged
    But I must revise for chem
    My sleep is jacked up
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    Extremely jetlagged
    But I must revise for chem
    My sleep is jacked up
    it ain't natural
    if God wanted us to fly
    we would have feathers
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    it ain't natural
    if God wanted us to fly
    we would have feathers
    I enjoyed it though.
    How else would I see Sydney?
    I can't go on foot?
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    (Original post by homeland.lsw)
    I enjoyed it though.
    How else would I see Sydney?
    I can't go on foot?
    all the ancestors
    arrived down under by boat
    before the dreamtime

    :yep:
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    (Original post by the bear)
    Guten afternabend Gnadiges Fraulein
    That cheese gets everywhere nomsayin'
    This aint no haiku :headfire:
    Laughing so much but
    Unfortunately I must
    depart for homework
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    (Original post by CheeseIsVeg)
    Laughing so much but
    Unfortunately I must
    depart for homework
    hausaufgaben nu
    for you the thread is over
    calculator on
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    (Original post by the bear)
    we are internet
    our tomorrow is today
    get with the now dude
    Today is bit cold.
    Living in the warmer past.
    Get THAT dude. Got you?
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    (Original post by Kallisto)
    Today is bit cold.
    Living in the warmer past.
    Get THAT dude. Got you?
    reboot and update
    your system needs enhancing
    the future is now
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    (Original post by the bear)
    :beard:
    the syllable scheme
    is not entirely correct
    check lines 2 and 3


    :cake::emo:
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    It is Halloween!
    That would be a creepy night!
    Amidst of autumn!

    In this sense: Happy Halloween and don't scare!
 
 
 
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