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    (Original post by Puddles the Monkey)
    Once thought a guy called VannR,
    In espying a thread from afar,
    "I'll peruse this submission,
    and gain much erudition!"
    But 'twas all so much piffle and blah
    Now that was good.
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    (Original post by the bear)
    just be yourself.
    Fine. Let's go!

    Refugees are escaping from their countries,
    with a boat they are sailing to europe.
    Look at the water corpses.
    They are swimming on the surface of the ocean,
    they are lying on the beach.

    Refugees are escaping from their countries,
    the bad living conditions forcing them to come to Europe,
    some arrive at their goal,
    they are too many.
    going back home?
    going to another European country?
    we have no idea.

    Refugees are escaping from their countries,
    they have no home,
    they have to go.
    It is an endless trip
    We cannot do anything.
    Cannot we?

    Refugees are escaping from their countries...

    What do you think about this poem, especially the repetition? wrote it in some minutes.
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    (Original post by Kallisto)
    Fine. Let's go!

    Refugees are escaping from their countries,
    with a boat they are sailing to europe.
    Look at the water corpses.
    They are swimming on the surface of the ocean,
    they are lying on the beach.

    Refugees are escaping from their countries,
    the bad living conditions forcing them to come to Europe,
    some arrive at their goal,
    they are too many.
    going back home?
    going to another European country?
    we have no idea.

    Refugees are escaping from their countries,
    they have no home,
    they have to go.
    It is an endless trip
    We cannot do anything.
    Cannot we?

    Refugees are escaping from their countries...

    What do you think about this poem, especially the repetition? wrote it in some minutes.
    very effective
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    (Original post by the bear)
    very effective
    Good to know. I will writing another poems of political issues next time. By the way thanks for correction.
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    (Original post by Kallisto)
    Good to know. I will writing another poems of political issues next time. By the way thanks for correction.
    we look forward to your next submission
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    (Original post by the bear)
    we look forward to your next submission
    Me too. Would love to see another submissions of you, no matter what it is.
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    (Original post by Kallisto)
    Me too. Would love to see another submissions of you, no matter what it is.
    You are too kind Sir

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