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Feedback on my poem - trynna make it in da hood, ya feel me? Watch

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    (Original post by TheGuy117)
    WORD, Hey Reform, your lines are whack...YO
    I really suggest you give this pursuit up...YO
    Although I'm pretty sure this is a troll thread...YO
    Get back under your bridge...WORD

    :facepalm::facepalm:
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    (Original post by ZRO)
    :facepalm::facepalm:
    I agree, word was a bad choice, fixed now.
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    (Original post by TheGuy117)
    I agree, word was a bad choice, fixed now.
    1000x better.
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    (Original post by TheGuy117)
    YO, BIATCH - Reform, your lines are whack...YO
    I really suggest you give this pursuit up...YO
    Although I'm pretty sure this is a troll thread...YO
    Get back under your bridge...BIATCH
    With authority comes playa haters. ^

    This guy is an example of someone who shows no lyrical prowess. No rhythm. A simple yo to end the sentence.

    I'm not going to even respond to such a horrendous rhyme, get at me when you're better.

    Ya dig?
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    (Original post by ZRO)
    Uh huh and i make cakes. We diversified gangstas
    The perfect mix between feminine and masculine
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    (Original post by Reform)
    With authority comes playa haters. ^

    This guy is an example of someone who shows no lyrical prowess. No rhythm. A simple yo to end the sentence.

    I'm not going to even respond to such a horrendous rhyme, get at me when you're better.

    Ya dig?
    BIATCH, let's go, right now, TSR RAP BATTLE, you and me YO, the floor is all yours Brah.
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    (Original post by eliza.anne)
    The perfect mix between feminine and masculine

    Haha well uhmm what can I say
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    (Original post by TheGuy117)
    BIATCH, let's go, right now, TSR RAP BATTLE, you and me YO, the floor is all yours Brah.
    The caps won't save you. If you want a rap battle, set it up.

    Me and my dons will shred you to pieces.

    Ya heard?
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    i like it
    but i did think you were going to post something deep lol
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    (Original post by Reform)
    The caps won't save you. If you want a rap battle, set it up.

    Me and my dons will shred you to pieces.

    Ya heard?
    http://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/show...3#post42071193

    YO let's go BIATCH
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    say nizzzzzzzzzz, it's on.
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    (Original post by getaway)
    i like it
    but i did think you were going to post something deep lol
    Original huh?
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    Oryt oryt check 3 4, 5 and 6
    Reform can't rap, also he can't mix
    On the other hand I get all the chicks
    Your bars are wack can you pls try to fix?


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    (Original post by Jaegon Targaryen)
    Im feeling them bars still .

    Ite drop a beat , bum bum chick bum bum chick TSR Crew , you know what it is !

    Life on a struggle is tough for man
    Be hitting up the poundshop buying tin spam
    Grindining on the daily , trying to hustle what I can
    Rationing these ice land meals gram by gram
    Dont get rude our il uppercut your nan!
    That was masterful.

    PRSOM.
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    Too many underrated rappers on here.. We need to make a clique
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    I named myself jaegon cos my flow be like fire
    Its pretty to touch but it consumes till a pile
    Of ash cos I'm nitty and gritty like dat
    I'll leave u slumped down an alley all ****ty like that .

    Cross me and you'll end up an arsons survivor .
    So empty your pockets g , and buck man a fiver.
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    Every other upcoming rapper here is moist (with the exception of ZRO).

    Retire and leave rapping to me.
 
 
 
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