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    (Original post by the bear)
    syllabic wrongness
    in the third and final line
    please reduce to five

    :hat2:
    Spring haiku writing
    who knew counting up to five
    so fcuking hard

    ;-)
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    (Original post by the bear)
    Mademoiselle j'ai du changer qch. pour ameliorer les syllables...
    Aww sorry quand je prononce chocolate ça fait 2 syllabes du coup j'avais pas réalisé :emo:
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    (Original post by FrenchUnicorn)
    Aww sorry quand je prononce chocolate ça fait 2 syllabes du coup j'avais pas réalisé :emo:
    alors une petite fessee et on n'en parlera plus :yep:

    :spank:

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    (Original post by the bear)
    Senpai is happy
    That grasshopper made amends
    Without complaining
    Complain? How silly!
    It is common courtesy!
    I'm a grasshopper?
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    (Original post by homeland.lsw)
    Complain? How silly!
    It is common courtesy!
    I'm a grasshopper?
    many years ago
    a famous tv programme
    it was called Kung Fu
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    (Original post by the bear)
    alors une petite fessee et on n'en parlera plus :yep:

    :spank:

    :rofl:


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    Dear Mister the bear,
    My apologies, I am
    A good polyglot
    :innocent:
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    (Original post by FrenchUnicorn)
    Dear Mister the bear,
    My apologies, I am
    A good polyglot
    :innocent:
    my dear French lady
    it is all for your own good
    spanking makes me sad
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    (Original post by the bear)
    my dear French lady
    it is all for your own good
    spanking makes me sad
    You sure about that ?
    Je crois qu'il vaut mieux que là
    Je parle en français
    :lol:
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    (Original post by FrenchUnicorn)
    You sure about that ?
    Je crois qu'il vaut mieux que là
    Je parle en français
    :lol:

    m'essuyant les larmes
    lors du spankage merité
    de ma bien aimeé


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    i weep bitter tears after the legitimate spanking of my dear friend
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    m'essuyant les larmes
    lors du spankage merité
    de ma bien aimeé

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    i weep bitter tears after the legitimate spanking of my dear friend
    Mérité dis-tu ?
    Sors un peu de ta grotte bear,
    Rainbows are outside
    :bear: :bear: :bear:
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    (Original post by FrenchUnicorn)
    Mérité dis-tu ?
    Sors un peu de ta grotte bear,
    Rainbows are outside
    :bear: :bear: :bear:
    j'en ai marre des arcs
    nargué par leurs indigos
    je baisse les yeux faibles

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    rainbows cause me grief i avert my weakened eyes from their brilliance
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    (Original post by the bear)
    ein verletzter Luchs
    sucht in den Kiefern Obdach
    der Nebel verbrennt
    Hey, that is very good! but what is the sense in the last line in terms of the two lines before? Okay, its my turn! here is a German one by a German native speaker!

    Jetzt kommt der Frühling!
    Die vielen Vögel sind da,
    wo sind die Menschen?
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    j'en ai marre des arcs
    nargué par leurs indigos
    je baisse les yeux faibles
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    rainbows cause me grief i avert my weakened eyes from their brilliance
    Les arcs sont si beaux
    Tu devrais les admirer,
    Pendant qu'ils sont là
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    (Original post by Kallisto)
    Hey, that is very good! but what is the sense in the last line in terms of the two lines before? Okay, its my turn! here is a German one by a German native speaker!

    Jetzt kommt der Frühling!
    Die vielen Vögel sind da,
    wo sind die Menschen?
    alles in ordnung !!

    my third line referred to the mist burning off in the spring sunshine. perhaps the mist was helping the Lynx to hide, perhaps its chilliness was harming the Lynx ?
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    It's spring already
    Help me, exams are so soon
    **** **** **** **** ****
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    (Original post by JM999)
    It's spring already
    Help me, exams are so soon
    **** **** **** **** ****
    Enjoy this season.
    So, give it a ****!
    nothing is certain.

    (Original post by the bear)
    alles in ordnung !!

    my third line referred to the mist burning off in the spring sunshine. perhaps the mist was helping the Lynx to hide, perhaps its chilliness was harming the Lynx ?
    I see. I have understand your allegory at last.
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    (Original post by Kallisto)
    Jetzt kommt der Frühling!
    Die vielen Vögel sind da,
    wo sind die Menschen?
    this is lovely mein Herr !!

    all of the syllables are correctly organized and disciplined.
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    (Original post by Kallisto)
    Enjoy this season.
    So, give it a ****!
    There is no guarantee.
    .
    Thanks, i'll try...
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    (Original post by the bear)
    this is lovely mein Herr !!

    all of the syllables are correctly organized and disciplined.
    Here is another one in German:

    Frühlingserwachen!
    Das ist die Zeit, in welcher
    die Bäume lachen.

    Can a haiku be written which would work both in German and English?
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    Oh look a flower
    This means I have to go out
    And get some fresh air
 
 
 
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