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    Someone help me please
    The sun's out it's blinding me
    Let me back inside
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    (Original post by Kallisto)

    Enjoy this season.
    So, give it a ****!
    There is no guarantee.
    Cannot believe it that the bear has overseen my mistake in line #3. What is the matter with you? did you become blind?
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    Cannot believe it that the bear has overseen my mistake in line #3. What is the matter with you? did you become blind?


    :spank::spank::spank::spank::spank:

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    stigma style carpel
    lady parts of the flower
    hungry for pollen
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    (Original post by the bear)


    :spank::spank::spank::spank::spank:

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    Oh, come on! I might re-spank you, as you didn't see the breach of style in my haiku. That is worse by far.
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    producing studly pollen
    dehiscent playas
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    more than once I've sneezed
    Today I have noticed spring
    Stupid allergies
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    (Original post by homeland.lsw)
    I guess spring is nice
    Apart from hayfever so...
    Piriton for me!
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    (Original post by mscaffrey)

    My eyes are streaming,
    There is mucus in my throat,
    I can't stop sneezing.

    ~~An Ode to Hayfever Season~~


    (Original post by iEthan)
    more than once I've sneezed
    Today I have noticed spring
    Stupid allergies
    hayfever haiku
    they are not to be sneezed at
    atishoo bless you
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    nearer may than march
    the weather is not springlike
    come back please the sun
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    I am back with another haiku about a spring-autumn-like season:

    boy, a fresh wind blows!
    it is a bit like autumn,
    leaves are rising up.
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    spring spring spring spring spring
    sneeze sneeze sneeze sneeze sneeze sneeze sneeze
    spring spring spring sneeze sneeze
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    (Original post by iEthan)
    spring spring spring spring spring
    sneeze sneeze sneeze sneeze sneeze sneeze
    spring spring spring sneeze sneeze

    you have not sneezed enough in line 2 :naughty:


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    (Original post by the bear)
    you have not sneezed enough in line 2 :naughty:

    :spank::spank::spank::spank::spank:

    :spank::spank::spank::spank::spank::spank::spank:

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    a simple typo,
    bear™, nothing to fret about
    it is now correct
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    Prague's the place to be in spring
    It's just a shame that
    ****ing tourists see my point

    naše pravidla
    stanoví pět sedm pět
    zjistit potřeby


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    we ask for 5-7-5. please czech your working
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    It is time for a new haiku, let's go:

    Spring is very nice,
    but summer is still better,
    I am sorry, spring.

    Anyone who is able to write a haiku in original language, so Japanese?
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    (Original post by Kallisto)
    It is time for a new haiku, let's go:

    Spring is very nice,
    but summer is still better,
    I am sorry, spring.

    Anyone who is able to write a haiku in original language, so Japanese?

    Shin ichōnoha
    kiiro no bukkumāku
    kusa no nikki
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    (Original post by the bear)
    Shin ichōnoha
    kiiro no bukkumāku
    kusa no nikki
    Do you really speak Japanese?!?! are you kidding me right now?!!! what is the meaning of this haiku in English? can you translate it?
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    Do you really speak Japanese?!?! are you kidding me right now?!!! what is the meaning of this haiku in English? can you translate it?
    my English is a bit won kee... ask Puddles-san for help
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    (Original post by the bear)
    my English is a bit won kee... ask Puddles-san for help
    Did this member help you writing a haiku in Japanese? you should not write a haiku in a language which you don't master.
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    (Original post by Kallisto)
    Did this member help you writing a haiku in Japanese? you should not write a haiku in a language which you don't master.
    so many question
    like bluebottle in jam jar
    buzz buzz buzz buzz buzz
 
 
 
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