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    (Original post by JasmineMartin99)
    I ended question 1 as "speak soon from (my name)" instead of Maria - however in the whole letter I showed that i knew I was Maria but I stupidly forgot when signing off, do you think I will get marks deducted?
    Same :confused:
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    When will I ever need to know that a Varroa Destructor (best name ever) causes susceptibility to wing viruses in bees
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    I hope this unofficial mark scheme may help some of you.

    http://www.thestudentroom.co.uk/show...5#post64555765
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    I reckon the boundaries will be low cos of how disgusting question 2 was, the available quotes were beyond **** and I didn't know what to write without sounding like a D grade student
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    (Original post by byaakun)
    lol i really struggled to create an effect out of mirage - i had no clue what it meant, along with a few other words. maybe i need to work on my vocab
    For the mirage quote i wrote how they can't believe it is real. Mirage means an illusion which is the same as them not believing it is real. I also wrote how this creates beauty as they are in awe as they can't believe it is real.
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    (Original post by HouseOfRichman)
    Something like:
    2.a) the description of the narrative
    2.b) the description by Al and Mr Head of the market


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    I don't even know what they mean by description of the narrative but I did talk about Al and mr head in part b so that's good
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    For Q1 I think I got 9/15 for reading and 3/5 for writing - 12/20

    For Q2 I think I got 7/10

    And for Q3a I think I got 15/15 and for part (b) 3/5 - 18/20

    Hopefully I get 30+ on the paper. I only need maximum 35/50 for an A* overall
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    the question 2 did not have 4 powerful words or phrases,

    So happy to see that it was a letter !
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    What if I wrote about the tatty trinkeys, white washed walls (alliteration)
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    (Original post by mmgnaahk123)
    For Q1 I think I got 9/15 for reading and 3/5 for writing - 12/20

    For Q2 I think I got 7/10

    And for Q3a I think I got 15/15 and for part (b) 3/5 - 18/20

    Hopefully I get 30+ on the paper. I only need maximum 35/50 for an A* overall
    Do you remember what you wrote for the notes?
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    (Original post by tmg1999)
    is CCD a point in itself for question 3!?
    Yea xD
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    (Original post by Burkay)
    What if I wrote about the tatty trinkeys, white washed walls (alliteration)
    I wrote about them too, but I'm not sure that white washed walls counts because it's not actually what the question was asking for? Idk I hope it is because that's what I said too
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    (Original post by caitlinford3)
    Yes! I wrote that the 'pain in her neck' was a realistic metaphor of her husband!
    Same!!!


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    (Original post by Burkay)
    What if I wrote about the tatty trinkeys, white washed walls (alliteration)
    I also wrote about the alliteration of "white-washed walls". I remember writing how the alliteration makes the phrase more memorable and thus mimics how the white infrastructure is so beautiful that it remains in one's mind, like how the alliteration makes it easier to remember the phrase "white-washed walls"
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    (Original post by examhater44)
    Could we have wrote that the husband blatantly refused to go to the animal sanctuary (was very stubborn) and that another plan for the rest of the trip could be that they would continue with excursions if the husband was fit enough?
    For Q1's 3 bullet points I found that bullets 1 and 2 were also slightly inferred. Did anyone else experience that?
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    Hmm, Question 3 I didnt do so good

    I said
    1 - Unpaid Labour
    2 - CCD
    3 - Blood sucking mite
    4 - Techniques to attract pollen
    5 - 30% crops ...
    6 - Climate change
    7 - bizzare local weather conditions
    8 - Stress
    I think it is wrong.
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    7 more but i cant remember.
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    Guys in q2 there wasn't any personification, similies or metaphors....
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    Has anyone written the points for question 3a yet?


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    (Original post by Burkay)
    Hmm, Question 3 I didnt do so good

    I said
    1 - Unpaid Labour
    2 - CCD
    3 - Blood sucking mite
    4 - Techniques to attract pollen
    5 - 30% crops ...
    6 - Climate change
    7 - bizzare local weather conditions
    I think it is wrong.
    I essentially wrote the same so I hope it is right for both our sakes
 
 
 
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