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    This is my coursework for english. As we were probably notice its more sexual than anything and It suppose to be romantic. I like the storyline I have but It HAS TO be romantic - any ideas?

    The only idea for an ending I have is he turns out to be gay and runs off with a balding gardener who rides a motorbike.

    Secret Seduction

    His face turned dark and cold, “You know what to do. Don’t fail me again!” and with that he disappeared in the thin air.

    She jumped down from atop of the lush, green, oak tree branch from which she had been glazing lazily from. In her left hand was a loaded red crossbow, with the golden initials WW engraved delicately. Slowly and silently she slid behind the oak tree and out of the moonlight, took aim and then fired. Her victim stopped and with a little “Oh” fell to the ground. She had done it. She picked her victim up and tossed him easily over her shoulder. She broke something in her right hand and dropped it. Exploding, the contents cover the woman and when it cleared she was gone.
    “It was Willow Winter, all right,” said Felicity Fark two hours later.
    “How come?” ask the confused agent standing next to her.
    “She left an engraved arrow behind”
    “What now?” he asked even more puzzled
    “Men, never think do you? I leave for The Master’s Headquarters…tonight!”

    The light of home had never been so welcoming. Granted, she was almost 200ft underground and the cravens were brimming with red artificial lava but it was home. Leaning with her right booted foot against the wall, her right hand was fumbling with her golden buttoned top which clung tightly allowing little breathing space creating a spilling cleavage. It had red flared sleeves but the rest was black-bottle green leather which matched her tight leather trousers. Her behaviour was attracting the attention of the male security guard who she blew flirtatious kiss to. “Err…,” he quickly said, “The Master will see you now Miss Winter”
    “Thanks,” she replied striding towards to door. An evil smile appeared across her blood red lips as she heard the security guard muttered “Nice, very nice.”

    “Willow,” he said darkly as she entered, “Finally you have done something to please me but….”
    “But what, Master?” she replied as he started to circle her scanning her body with expertise.
    “I want something more; you have pure talent, Willow. Find out about the Peace Talks from Mr. Pansy and I will grant you anything your heart desires now go!”
    Bowing, she left the room as the phone rung “Hello Mother Bye Mother,” she heard him say.

    Felicity Fark was half-hidden in the darkness. She saw the striking steel back door to The Master Headquarters guarded by four strong men in The Master’s Uniform. She pulled out a silver coin and threw it in the opposite direction to way she wanted to go. It worked. Two of the men headed toward the coin with cocked guns, the other two stayed but this wasn’t a problem. “Oi, You!” she shouted then disappeared fully into the darkness. They rushed at her not standing a chance. She took out the first with a perfect side kick to gut which send him flying and into an open rubbish bin which slammed shut. The other looked shocked but charged at her anyway only to be tossed over her shoulder like a sack of potatoes. He quickly returned to his feet and she caught him with a spinning back kick. His final feeble assault resulted in his hand being pulled round his back. He screamed.
    “Where is Percy Pansy?” she demanded.
    “I’ve never heard of hi-” His sentence ended in a scream of pain as Felicity Fark yanked one of his fingers backwards and broke it.
    “Now, where is he?”
    “I’m not –” Crack! Another finger broke, “All right, he is in the Cells on the Mort Floor.” She released him and he ran. With her gun already drawn she fired two shots. As she walked past the now sprawled out victim she said “Nighty Night”

    Willow Winter entered the Mort Floor with two Winter Ninjas. She was still in her leather get-up but her red hair was now loose and wavy right down to the bottom of her back. The Ninjas stood dressed in knee-length leather boots, black flared trousers and white tight fitting t-shirts. Over the t-shirts they wore a red gi like top tied with a brown belt which carried a Katana Sword. They strode purposely to the cell in which Percy Pansy sat in severe sobs. Willow looked at the guards standing either side of the cell. They left and the two Ninjas took their place. Willow entered the cell.
    “Hello Percy” she said sweet.
    He looked up and Willow had to take a step back. He had burnt brown hair, brown beetle-like eyes hidden beneath thick framed green glasses. He wore a perfect black suit with white shirt and black tie which looked as if it had been just put on and black shoes. The only evidence he had been kidnapped was his left trousers leg was torn to the knee. He was downright dazzling.

    “Who are you?” he demanded in his feeble but deep voice. She moved slowly, sliding her hands down her corset-bound body.
    “Willow Winter, infamous Ninja Leader of the Winter Ninjas, I’m sure you’ve heard of me.” She replied sweet toned, his face turned a horrible grey. She moved closer and closer to him and he recoiled until he was trapped against in a corner.
    “Now, Percy darling, I believe you have some information for Me.” She spoke softly, kneeing down so her knees were either side of his legs, “Tell me about the Peace Talks and I will give you the time of your life.”
    “Oh god”
    “Step away from him, Willow” said a familiar voice. Willow felt something sharp in it her neck. Raising her hands, she turned to face her attacker and there she stood, Felicity Fark armed with a stolen Katana Sword as she had silently slaughtered the Ninjas. “Farky, Fine,” she said stepping away from Percy and her right hand became a fist, “See you again soon.” And she opened her hand. The dust soon cleared and as usual Willow was gone.


    Notes about story

    1. There were no female Ninjas but I have done this on purpose to be able to write about it in my commentry.
    2. Guns no longer have cocks but this is again done on purpose - think about it (The sex was good but he was firing blanks - hehe get it?)
    3. Percy Pansy, Willow Winter, Felicity Fark - named like this on purpose to write about it in my commentry.
    4. I don't if Katana Sword exist or not but there are swords which I believe Ninjas used.
    5. People don't disapper in it thin air but again this is done on purpose.
    6. It doesn't end like this.
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    It's too late to read all of that, lol.
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    (Original post by Ralfskini)
    It's too late to read all of that, lol.
    Its a good example of Women Power and its funny!
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    (Original post by a_musical_gal)
    Its a good example of Women Power and its funny!

    Ok, I'll try and struggle through it.
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    It sounds more like a plot for a good porn film. ahhh, helloe ladies!¬

    Haha. My English coursework was titled "Eugene Bean and the Time Travelling Machine."

    You may want to be a bit careful about posting coursework on the internet.
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    (Original post by Harry Potter)
    Haha. My English coursework was titled "Eugene Bean and the Time Travelling Machine."
    Almost as funny as my friends story of "Rusell the love muscle"
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    (Original post by 2776)
    It sounds more like a plot for a good porn film. ahhh, helloe ladies!¬
    you need a girl mate!
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    (Original post by a_musical_gal)
    you need a girl mate!
    u need to improve the story mate.

    (Original post by 2776)
    Almost as funny as my friends story of "Rusell the love muscle"
    LOL. Genius.
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    (Original post by Harry Potter)
    You may want to be a bit careful about posting coursework on the internet.
    I am the only one mad enough to write a story like this!
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    (Original post by a_musical_gal)
    I am the only one mad enough to write a story like this!
    Its a good backbone of a story. U need tor eally develop the characters more, and so dfar the names make them look more comical than serious
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    I'm open to suggestions for better names - however I need a good explaintion why for my commentry.
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    (Original post by a_musical_gal)
    I'm open to suggestions for better names - however I need a good explaintion why for my commentry.
    some more ordinary names would suffice, the real detail is the story, he names are too comical, how about Philip Wallace
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    Ignoring the main content, there are a few grammatical things etc so you might want to have a quick read through again.

    Also- you can just say 'katana' rather than 'Katana Sword' -though you might want to keep an original explanation of what it is as not many people will know. They are actually traditionally Samuri weapons (swords), rather than Ninjas who would probably be equipped with shurikens etc. I may be wrong here so feel free to correct me anyone.
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    (Original post by Egan1)
    Ignoring the main content, there are a few grammatical things etc so you might want to have a quick read through again.

    Also- you can just say 'katana' rather than 'Katana Sword' -though you might want to keep an original explanation of what it is as not many people will know. They are actually traditionally Samuri weapons (swords), rather than Ninjas who would probably be equipped with shurikens etc. I may be wrong here so feel free to correct me anyone.
    I thought so Egan - Samurai do use swords, Ninjas use Shurikens.
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    (Original post by 2776)
    Philip Wallace
    Your reason behind that? Sorry but I have to write about the names in my commentry
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    (Original post by a_musical_gal)
    Your reason behind that? Sorry but I have to write about the names in my commentry
    That name is a classy name, better than "percy". Wallace somehow conjurous up image of someone stolid and secure.
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    (Original post by a_musical_gal)
    Your reason behind that? Sorry but I have to write about the names in my commentry
    So do you have to do alliterated names?
 
 
 
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