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Reply 1

tina6628188
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I wonder which style of personal statement and letters of reference from professors can impress the admission tuitor.
I will apply for MA of University of Manchester in Jan. and I'm hurry to have some samples about ps.
Could some1 help me?

for which course?

Reply 2

youyou
for which course?

I want to apply business management & HR & hospital management

Reply 3

tina6628188
I want to apply business management & HR & hospital management

i applied for the science SUBJECT,SO sorry to tell you that i know nothing about business management.
but i can tell you the structure of writing it.
1P.write down what course you are going to apply and why you want to choose it.
2P.explain how the subject you are studying will help you to do well in the Uni.
3P.your work experience(you'd better have one or two)
4P.your personal interest...
5P.conculsion...
i don't know whether the things above will actually help you...anyway.
good luck.....

Reply 4

tina6628188
I want to apply business management & HR & hospital management

as long as your refference is good ,every thing will be ok.+ famous professor's recommadation.

Reply 5

beneath
as long as your refference is good ,every thing will be ok.+ famous professor's recommadation.

but what kind of reference will interest the professor?

Reply 6

tina6628188
:confused:
I wonder which style of personal statement and letters of reference from professors can impress the admission tuitor.
I will apply for MA of University of Manchester in Jan. and I'm hurry to have some samples about ps.
Could some1 help me?


As Beneath said, good reference is essential.
But the most important thing is: it should b personal,otherwise they wont kno what kind of person u r, just b urself & write sth positive abt urself .ie, achievement,experence,ect ...which should b relavent 2 ur choosing course.
Also send ur application form as soon as possible so that the uin got enough time 2 consider u.
If u still got problems with it,do give me some notice.I wil try my best 2 help u.
Btw, r u going 2 apply 4 undergraduate course or postgraduate ?
I m talking abt undergraduate.
Hope this wil give u some ideas.
Good luck! :wink:

Reply 7

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Reply 8

shedow
As Beneath said, good reference is essential.
But the most important thing is: it should b personal,otherwise they wont kno what kind of person u r, just b urself & write sth positive abt urself .ie, achievement,experence,ect ...which should b relavent 2 ur choosing course.
Also send ur application form as soon as possible so that the uin got enough time 2 consider u.
If u still got problems with it,do give me some notice.I wil try my best 2 help u.
Btw, r u going 2 apply 4 undergraduate course or postgraduate ?
I m talking abt undergraduate.
Hope this wil give u some ideas.
Good luck! :wink:

Thanks a lot :smile:
But i'm applying postgraduate. r they interested in my GPA, or they will pay special attention 2 my part-time work experience? My GPA is 85,(full is 100) is that enough? I heard from my friend that it's very hard 2 enter the University of Manchester,the proportion is abt 1:10
What do u think UMIST? and any Universities good 4 management subjects? :wink:

Reply 9

tina6628188
Thanks a lot :smile:
But i'm applying postgraduate. r they interested in my GPA, or they will pay special attention 2 my part-time work experience? My GPA is 85,(full is 100) is that enough? I heard from my friend that it's very hard 2 enter the University of Manchester,the proportion is abt 1:10
What do u think UMIST? and any Universities good 4 management subjects? :wink:


In my opinion, management is very hard.(mayb just 4 me,I dont know) Especially 4 the student whose first language is not English.
But u r brill.
If there r loads of compititions,they wil consider whatever the info u sent 2 them.Just put the things u'v done,they mite intrested in it.
UMIST is going 2 combine with MU next yr,so,NOW, it makes no difference 2 choose MU or UMIST. And of course UMIST is famous 4 its bussiness school.If they wont combine 2gether ,I 'd rather choose
UMIST.
Oh,good unis 4 management ,Ox & LSE. They r even harder 2 get in.But u still can try.
MU is not that hard 2 get in,trust me. :biggrin:

Reply 10

shedow
In my opinion, management is very hard.(mayb just 4 me,I dont know) Especially 4 the student whose first language is not English.
But u r brill.
If there r loads of compititions,they wil consider whatever the info u sent 2 them.Just put the things u'v done,they mite intrested in it.
UMIST is going 2 combine with MU next yr,so,NOW, it makes no difference 2 choose MU or UMIST. And of course UMIST is famous 4 its bussiness school.If they wont combine 2gether ,I 'd rather choose
UMIST.
Oh,good unis 4 management ,Ox & LSE. They r even harder 2 get in.But u still can try.
MU is not that hard,trust me. :biggrin:

I'm interested in advertising & HR & hospital management. Maybe advertisng is hard 4 me cause we have a different cultural background.what's ur opinion and what abt the project management?
which subject is more suitable 4 a foreign student? :tongue:

Reply 11

tina6628188
I'm interested in advertising & HR & hospital management. Maybe advertisng is hard 4 me cause we have a different cultural background.what's ur opinion and what abt the project management?
which subject is more suitable 4 a foreign student? :tongue:


Its better 2 choose the course u like,otherwise u wont enjoy the course & the life in the uni I supose.