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    Hi,

    I started to write my personal statement (draft) and i need ur comments about making it better.

    Anyone willing to help?
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    Needs to be longer

    Seriously though, I wrote my PS (9 years ago) for Chemistry and Computer Science - even though I've forgotten what I put down. I'll have a look if you want.

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    (Original post by goku999)
    Hi,

    I started to write my personal statement (draft) and i need ur comments about making it better.

    Anyone willing to help?
    I'm happy to look at it if you'd like a 2nd opinion. I applied for Maths and Philosophy last year, so it's all pretty much in my mind still.
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    I can have a look if you'd like.
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    me too i can also have a look if u dont mind. i will show u mine too. hope we can both critise each other ps
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    anyone else?
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    I can help with the Comp Sci part...
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    i am willing to apply for CS as well
    if you dont mind plz give me a copy too
    maybe i can give some suggestions
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    I'll suggest some parts if you want. I'm applying for straight maths. Where are you applying to?
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    I could help you with the Computer Science part of the personal statement. For the time being, you could visit this site for sample personal statements: http://www.studential.com/personalst...se.asp?type=12, http://www.personalstatement.info/UC...nce/index.html
 
 
 

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