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    During act 1 scene 3 Iago’s antagonistic motives are exposed to the audience. Referring to Roderigo he says amid his soliloquy ‘Thus do I ever make my fool my purse’. Iago exposes his true motives regarding his co-operation with Roderigo. Iago confessed himself to the audience as a deceitful person who merely makes use of others for ones own self-interest. In the soliloquy it is made clear that his interests lie in

    Can it be worded better? does it make sense? Plz help, doing AS coursework essay in for tommorrow.

    You may wish to consider varying your use of punctuation - using a semicolon to link related sentences, for example.

    "Iago exposes his true motives regarding his co-operation with Roderigo." - You need to either provide another quote as evidence for this, or to link sentences 2 and 3 to make it clear that the ideas of sentence 3 are backed up by the evidence in sentence two (otherwise sentence 3 appears to be without quite enough explanation.)

    Basically, I think that your ideas and use of quotation are very good, but you need to adjust the punctuation to ensure that the ideas are linked in a way that is clear to the examiner, clearly showing your train of though. You see?
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    Thanks, I'll come back if I have any more queries.
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