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Could someone check my AS-Level essay on Fats? Preferably an A2/uni student watch

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    Hey,
    If any one has a spare half hour to read it and give me any feedback/corrections, I would really appreciate it
    The essay is around 900 words.
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    I can read it for punctuation and spelling but not the actual content
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    (Original post by lola1993)
    Hey,
    If any one has a spare half hour to read it and give me any feedback/corrections, I would really appreciate it
    The essay is around 900 words.
    I'll have a shot if you like.
 
 
 
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