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    please im bare tired right now, gotta be up in 5 hours and my cw is due tomorrow morning, havent finisehd it yet and too tired to see if it makes sense, so yeah does this conclusion make sense, the title of the essay is 'you need love to make a marraige work':

    Ultimately, however, the primary way in which Austen proves that love is essential to the success of a marriage is by contrasting Elizabeth and Darcy’s marriage, which is based on love, with the marriages of the Bennets’ and the Collins’, which are based on lust and practicalities respectively. The differences between these marriages reveal the importance that love must play.
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    I haven't read those books so I'm afraid I can't really give a decent opinion... But from what I can tell, it looks really strong. You've said "Ultimately, however" and we don't know what you're however-ing! But yes, it makes sense. Go and get some sleep.
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    (Original post by Jose1989)
    I haven't read those books so I'm afraid I can't really give a decent opinion... But from what I can tell, it looks really strong. You've said "Ultimately, however" and we don't know what you're however-ing! But yes, it makes sense. Go and get some sleep.
    haha. thankyou. i always gets so scared when i see a response cos people on tsr tend to be so rude, and i was dreading seeing something like 'er what the hell is THIS?' and then i'd have to sit up half the night ahah.
 
 
 
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