AQA Text Transformation Coursework Watch

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Hey Guys!

I have to re-submit my coursework next Friday and im wondering what i can do to get an A.

I submitted it in January and got a D

Im really struggling on the Commentary part and my teacher is saying im not be analytical enough but he isnt really telling me where im going wrong.
Im using Margaret Atwood's The Handmaid's Tale and Christina Rossetti's No Thankyou John. They are two seperate transformations, the Atwood one is a Play revolving around Offred and Nicks relationship and the Rossetti piece is a letter from John Ruskin (Victorian style).

Any help would be much appreciated!
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