If you are willing to take a look at it for me and give me some advice, comments, suggestions then can you please send me a PM?
I'll give it the once over if you like for readability kinda thing
Can't say much about the IT side of things, but it's usually worth having a non-your-subject person read it just to see how it feels
Same as Beckaboo. I'd be happy to look over for structure and readibility.
Recieved your PM about that a few hours ago. I will check it over with you.
I'll have a look if you'd like. Just PM it to me.
I have a look if you want, some more advice.
I'll be able to take a look if you need...