Ugh, trying to write my 'extended plan' at the moment...I don't even know what is supposed to be in it. I hate writing plans, but I know it's important for an essay this length in particular. All it seems to be reinforcing though is that I've got far too much to say in 10,000 words and not enough evidence to prove it. =[ I think I'm just writing up my 'simple plan' in a slightly more verbose way....