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Extended essay First person or third person?

Hi im doing my Essay in chemistry, my question is:

Does the EE have to be in third person:

The Researcher then took a graduated pipette and shoved it in his I.B Coordinator


or can it be :

I took a graduated pipette.......



Do i loose marks if i use "I" ?


Btw here are my acknowledgements ^^

I would like to thank the Royal Society of Chemists for putting up such a detailed piece of work concerning the History of Aspirin which includes its origin and a detailed timeline as well as the laboratory work which was quite extensive and helpful for my Essay.

I would like to thank my Chemistry Supervisor Dr.Virgina Ques for helping me out with the title of this Extended essay as well as giving me the possibility to actually do it. I would also like to thank her for buying the chemicals and generally being a good, supportive and helpful teacher throughout the year as well as awakening my interest in Chemistry.

I would like to thank my Mother for making me Tea and Sandwiches in the middle of those sleepless nights where I was struggling to complete all my IB Internal Assesments and Extended Essays.

I would like to thank my friends for keeping me awake at night by chatting and fooling around in MSN just to keep me from falling asleep

I would also like to thank Tchaikovsky, Bach and Beethoven, Armin van Buuren, Dj Tiesto ,Marco V and last but not least Barry White for their Music as it helped me work, concentrate and focus when writing my extended essay

I would also like to thank everyone I forgot to mention in here, who has helped me with my extended essay in any form

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Reply 1
okay.....I guess you have(??) to write it somewhere.....
I would say use 3rd person, just to be safe.
So you finished then?
Reply 2
no not quite, but do we have to use third person? is it written anywhere as a criteria?
Reply 3
You dont have the criteria? I can go and check if you want, I have a book with all of them in it.
Reply 4
i couldnt find it ANYWHERE in the criteria
Reply 5
But it may say something like 'using the appropriate register or language style'
I dont know really, I'm doing my EE in Psych. I was just saying that if ur not sure, use 3rd just in case.
And I meant like 'the length was measured using....
not the researcher, because ur taking about urself
Reply 6
Only for group 1&2 its not in the general criteria under formal presentation
Reply 7
okay- as I said, I dont know, its just what my class do in Bio. It cant matter that much, I suppose
Reply 8
I just decided to cross my chem teacher out of the acknowledgements
Reply 9
LiquidX
I just decided to cross my chem teacher out of the acknowledgements


Hey dude i think u have to do it in the first person....like i carried out this experiment by adding this onto that and then.......kabooooom...... :biggrin:
And my findings seemed interesting...blah blah....cos when i did mine on physics my teacher in charge said its supposed to refelect ur own ideas and so on....and if im not mistaken the students voice should be apparent in the essay
Reply 10
Oh great ****in job... now i rewrote about 800 words to the third person.

Make up your mind people!
im confused

I think third person makes it sound more... profound.. profession... prosomething you know what i mean?

I think ill just leave it in third person now.

Lets see its 1:34 am now , school starts at 8:30 , i need a shower and breakfast and 20 minutes of sleep that means i have......... 6 hours left ^^
Reply 11
LiquidX
Oh great ****in job... now i rewrote about 800 words to the third person.

Make up your mind people!
im confused

I think third person makes it sound more... profound.. profession... prosomething you know what i mean?

I think ill just leave it in third person now.

Lets see its 1:34 am now , school starts at 8:30 , i need a shower and breakfast and 20 minutes of sleep that means i have......... 6 hours left ^^


hey hold on il search for the criteria and give it 2 ya
Reply 12
Thanks alot m8
Reply 13
LiquidX
Thanks alot m8


Hey dude check this site out just found it its all chemistry

http://www.uwcsea.edu.sg/chem/IBfolder/IBH/NetExtenEssay/ChemExtendedEssay.html
Reply 14
always expository style,
Reply 15
dude its 2 am, what does expository sytle mean?
Reply 16
Heres a link 2 the assesment criteria cos the one on that page didnt work

http://extendedessay.bravehost.com/chem.html
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LiquidX
dude its 2 am, what does expository sytle mean?


I dunno y does sigh have to be so technical couldve just said 1st person or third person :confused:
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Hey ok it means u have to do it in an instructive manner so that any other person who wants to do ur experiment can do it :biggrin:
For eg: to blow up your house simply add a tiny cute lil ball of potassium nitrate onto some nasty concentrated acid and watch ur house go up in smoke :biggrin:
Reply 17
whatever ill just keep it third person and voila
Reply 18
LiquidX
whatever ill just keep it third person and voila


Yeah i guess that should do....let ur teacher decide
Reply 19
funny , in 5 hours its deadline ^^